Picking a Scene-Scene 1

So after deciding to turn one scene that I've planned into a motion comic, I need to analyse each scene to decide which one would fit best moving forward.


Scene 1

 Scene 1 was meant to open the story, it is a more experimental scene as it shows leaves blowing off a tree in central park and flying across Manhattan, before coming across a New York bus. The camera then switches focus to the bus showing Hayley inside. The camera follows the bus to a tall tower with hearts on its sides and as Hayley gets off the bus, the leaves from the beginning of the scene blow past her, ending the scene.




Analysis

 I wanted the opening to perfectly eclipse what the main themes of the story were going to be. The leaves falling off the tree and the orange sky representing the strong sense of season in the story. The motive of the leaves flying across Manhattan was actually inspired by the opening of Forrest Gump which shows a feather flying across a block before landing at the titular character's feet, opening up the story. Immediately we see the impact the city has had on Hayley, as she doesn't get a proper response from the bus driver and when she gets knocked by the wind and the leaves at the end, she looks away as if saying "Of course".


Verdict

 I personally don't think this scene would work well as a motion comic, when I designed this scene I really wanted to experiment with animation techniques to show the leaves floating through New York.



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